Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你剛認(rèn)識(shí)一位筆友。應(yīng)筆友要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件介紹你的學(xué)校和學(xué)校生活，并歡迎他來(lái)你的學(xué)校參觀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。

1.      你在第一中學(xué)上學(xué)，學(xué)校又大又現(xiàn)代化；

2.      每天花半小時(shí)乘公交車去上學(xué)，上學(xué)從不遲到；

3.      你的教室在一樓；

4.      早上通常先做早操，8點(diǎn)開(kāi)始上課；

5.      同學(xué)都很友好，空余時(shí)間相互聊天；

6.      在校總是過(guò)得很開(kāi)心。

注意：

1.      短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；

2.      詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. _____________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. I study at No. 1 Middle School. Our school is big and modern. It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day. I’m never late for school. My classroom is on the ground/first floor. We usually do morning exercises first. The lessons start at 8. My classmates are all very nice. We chat with each other in our free time. I always have a good time at school. Welcome to my school.

 Sandy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，按照提綱要求逐條翻譯成英文名字。同時(shí)還應(yīng)注意寫(xiě)作中要有適當(dāng)性的發(fā)揮。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 late for,do morning exercises ,have a good time,以及Let me tell you about my school,Our school is big and modern.It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day,We chat with each other in our free time文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。