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【題目】書面表達(dá)

時(shí)間都去哪兒了？這是許多成年人的感慨，也是一些中學(xué)生的煩惱：沒有時(shí)間做作業(yè)，沒有時(shí)間從事個(gè)人愛好… …

其實(shí)，時(shí)間就在我們的掌握之中，關(guān)鍵是能否合理利用。請根據(jù)提示，以“How to spend our time properly”為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

如何合理利用時(shí)間
學(xué)習(xí)方面	制定計(jì)劃，上課認(rèn)真聽講，按時(shí)完成作業(yè)---
愛好方面	愛好類型，合理安排時(shí)間，達(dá)到學(xué)業(yè)與愛好的平衡--
其他方面	交朋友，與朋友和睦相處，交流----

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點(diǎn)，可作必要的發(fā)揮；

3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

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If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

Answer 1

【答案】

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan for every day. Most of all, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we don’t need to spend so much time on them. So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies.

In other ways, we need time, too. For example, we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends.

If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文是讓寫出學(xué)生自己是怎樣合理安排時(shí)間的，在不同的時(shí)間都做些什么事情，所以句子的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)已經(jīng)給出的短文第二句可知這里的人稱以第一人稱we來寫。這里不要寫成第一人稱單數(shù)了，要注意上下文的銜接和高級詞匯的運(yùn)用。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和固定句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：make a plan for ；make a list ；make sb do sth；spend some time in doing sth ;it is+形容詞+ for sb to do sth等。文章用了一些連詞if，and，but，so等，使句子的結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一。為了上下文的銜接用了一些過渡詞如：most of all,then, in other ways等。