Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

現(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)而奮斗．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？

要求：1、短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；

3、語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；

4、詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．

Answer 1

【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．

In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。