Question

【題目】書面表達（計15分）

今年的3.15晚會曝光了北京一麥當勞店將過期食品改換包裝再次出售一事，引來輿論嘩然，食品衛(wèi)生安全再次成為人們關注的焦點。作為一名中學生消費者，該如何維護自己的權益，吃到放心的食品？請你根據(jù)下面提供的要點，給校報英語專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談談自己的看法（最少兩點）。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 應覆蓋所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3. 參考詞匯：overdue過期的；go bad變質(zhì)；invoice發(fā)票；Consumer Association消費者協(xié)會

Since the CCTV exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests? _________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version:

Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?

First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the invoice and take good care of it. Last but not the least, if we find there’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help.

Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇提綱類話題作文。請你給校報英語專欄寫一篇80詞左右的短文，并談談自己對如何維護自己的權益，吃到放心的食品的看法。話題貼近學生生活，使學生易于發(fā)揮。作文可以分為以下幾個方面： 1. 買食品前檢查生產(chǎn)日期，查看是否過期；2. 識別食品是否新鮮或變質(zhì)；3. 購物以后索取并保管好發(fā)票；4. 發(fā)現(xiàn)問題食品以后，撥打12315或向當?shù)叵�費者協(xié)會尋求幫助。要做到層次分明，段落清楚。人稱為第一人稱，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。注意句子結構要準確，要點要齊全，內(nèi)容要合理，篇章結構要連貫，還應滿足詞數(shù)要求。

寫作亮點：該文內(nèi)容合理，結構連貫，段落清晰，要點齊全。