Question

【題目】書面表達 （共l 題，計 20 分）

母愛情深，母愛無價；學會感恩，學會回報。某英語網(wǎng)站舉辦以“My mother”為題的英語征文活動。請你根據(jù)下列思維導圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹自己的母親和你們的真情故事。

提示:1.短文應(yīng)包括導圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明;

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名。3.詞數(shù)不少于80，開頭已給出:不計人總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

We need love. We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium height with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.

She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.

When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

寫作亮點：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。