Question

下表中是有關(guān)“強強與電視節(jié)目”的信息，請梳理內(nèi)容后用英語完成一篇作文，要求涵蓋所有要點，并運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞形成通順的短文,可適當發(fā)揮；字數(shù)120左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

特別提醒：注意書寫，書寫不好會損失20%甚至更多的分數(shù)，中考也是如此。

對節(jié)目的看法	看電視太多是不健康的，還存在傷眼的風險；因非足球迷，發(fā)現(xiàn)體育節(jié)目有點枯燥；動作片的武打?qū)η嗌倌暧绊懖涣�；最喜歡“動物 世界”，知道老虎比熊貓消亡得更快。
電視使用情況	原來家里僅一臺電視，常因看節(jié)目和弟弟爭吵，現(xiàn)在知道因此而不 原諒他是愚蠢的。
父親的要求	最好在看電視之前完成作業(yè)；現(xiàn)在期末考試(final exams)臨近，太忙沒有時間看電視。

Qiangqiang is considered as a top student. He has his own idea about watching TV. He thinks _________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Qiangqiang is considered as a top student. He has his own idea about watching TV. He thinks it’s unhealthy to watch too much TV(1分). And there’s a risk of hurting eyes(1分). He is not a football fan, so he often finds sports programs a bit boring(1分). He also thinks the fights in action films have a bad effect on teenagers(1分). His favorite program is Animal World(1分). He knows from it that tigers are disappearing faster than pandas(1分).

In the past, there used to be only one TV set at home(1分). He often argued with his brother about what program to watch(1分). Now he knows it was silly of him not to forgive him for this(1分). His father tells them that they had better finish their homework before they watch TV(1分). But now the final exams are coming, he is far too busy to watch TV(1分).

【解析】

 試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇文章，我們要用恰當?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含強強對節(jié)目的看法、家中電視的使用情況以及父親對他們看電視的要求幾個方面進行陳述，表達出個人的觀點等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱主要是第三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文簡明、扼要地闡明了強強對電視的基本觀點及自己的態(tài)度，并包含了文中表格中所要求的全部信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含賓語從句和狀語從句的準確使用為文章增色不少.如He is not a football fan, so he often finds sports programs a bit boring；have a bad effect on，there used to be，it was silly of him not to forgive him for this，he is far too busy to watch TV學習中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：提綱作文。