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【題目】 我們的身邊有很多榜樣人物，他們的行為時(shí)時(shí)影響著我們。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“My Role Model”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。談?wù)務(wù)l是你心中的偶像，他（她）是怎樣的人，用具體事例說(shuō)明為什么他（她）是你的偶像，以及你從他（她）身上學(xué)到了什么。

提示問(wèn)題：Who is your role model?

What’s he / she like?

Why is he / she your role model? Give one or two examples.

What have you learned from him / her?

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可以圍繞主題和提示問(wèn)題，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

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【答案】例文：

My Role Model

Everyone has a role model. My role model is my friend Tom.

He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I didn’t do well in studying, so he not only helped me with every subject, but also told me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Tom’s help, I made great progress and I thanked him very much.

I think I am lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Tom to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.

Written by Li Hua

【解析】

1.題干解讀：題干要求考生圍繞四個(gè)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行闡述；其中介紹原因時(shí)用舉例子展開敘述作為文章的主體，學(xué)到了什么可以作為文章的結(jié)尾，進(jìn)行一個(gè)升華；舉例的時(shí)候最好用過(guò)去的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)殛U述的是一個(gè)發(fā)生過(guò)的事實(shí)；學(xué)到了什么可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；注意分段和句子的銜接。