Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力，你校開(kāi)展了以“安全”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Safety rules at school”為題寫(xiě)一篇90詞左右的演講稿，介紹你們?cè)趯W(xué)校應(yīng)該注意的安全準(zhǔn)則。

提示：

1. 上、下樓梯(go upstairs or downstairs)不要擁擠；

2. 不要從樓上往下扔(throw)雜物；

3. 玩耍時(shí)不能使用刀等尖銳的(sharp)器械；

4. 在學(xué)校不抽煙、不喝酒。

Safety rules at school

Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school ______________________

_____________________________________________________________________Remember these rules, and we’ll be safe at school.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Safety rules at school

Hello, everyone! It’s important for us to keep safe at school. To be safe, we must follow these rules at school.

First, don’t crowd when we go upstairs or downstairs, or we may hurt ourselves by falling off steps. Second, don’t throw rubbish out of the windows of tall buildings. Third, never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates. Fourth, no smoking or drinking at school. They’re bad for our health.

Remember these rules, and we’ll be safe at school.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校的安全規(guī)則。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It’s important for us to...，F(xiàn)irst, don’t crowd when ...，They’re bad for ...，Remember these rules, and we’ll ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了在學(xué)校保持安全很重要，接下來(lái)介紹四條安全規(guī)則，最后總結(jié)記住這些規(guī)則，在學(xué)校才會(huì)安全。此處用了keep safe, fall off, play with, be bad for 等這些詞組，也讓文章增色不少。