Question

【題目】根據(jù)表格提供的信息，介紹自己的變化。

Things to do	When I was a child	Now
read	comic books and story books	novels and magazines
eat	junk food	healthy food
watch	cartoons on TV	thrillers at the theater
do…at school	play games with my classmates	play computer after class

I used to like reading comic books and story books when I was a child. But now I like reading novels.

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Answer 1

【答案】I used to like reading comic books and story books when I was a child. But now I like reading novels. When I was a child I used to like eating junk food because I thought they were delicious. But now I like eating healthy food because they are good for my health. I used to watch cartoons on TV when I was young, but now I like watching thrillers at the theater. I used to play games with my classmates at school, but now I like playing computer after class.

My favorite aunt is my aunt Karen. She is a very interesting person and a really good friend.

【解析】

試題這是一篇材料作文，結(jié)合所給寫作信息，以“我的變化”為話題，把自己的“過(guò)去”與“現(xiàn)在”的不同有條理地表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意人稱和一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中使用了but , like doing, junk food，healthy food, be good for，on TV，after class，and等詞或固定短語(yǔ)，使上下文意連接緊密, 過(guò)渡自然。同時(shí)，本文最大亮點(diǎn)是敘事條理、表達(dá)清晰；還使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等豐富的句型，為文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。