Question

假設(shè)某美國(guó)教育代表團(tuán)將來你校參觀訪問，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示的信息，用英語向外賓簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校近年來所發(fā)生的變化，并談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?br />

環(huán)境及設(shè)施	過去	現(xiàn)在
	至少列舉兩例說明過去情況	操場(chǎng)更大、籃球場(chǎng)更多；圖書新、品種多； 樹木四季常青，學(xué)校美如花園……
你的感想	……

注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于90。文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語法正確、上下文連貫。
3．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
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I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

Answer 1

Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts. More different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying environment. We will work harder and serve the people better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you very much!

解析試題分析：這是一篇介紹類作文，要點(diǎn)和開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點(diǎn)：介紹類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于介紹類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。