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書面表達(dá)

提示：假如你叫王平，參加了學(xué)校的“有煩惱向誰說？”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)(a survey)。

調(diào)查結(jié)果：1、大多數(shù)向同學(xué)、朋友說(理由：年齡相仿，容易交流和理解)

2、一些向老師、家長說(理由：經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富、可以得到幫助)

3、少數(shù)自己獨(dú)立解決(理由：不愿與人交流，難以與人相處)

請你根據(jù)中文提示用英語給某報(bào)社編輯寫一封信(信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出)，說明情況并提出你自己的觀點(diǎn)。字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞左右，不必逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Dear Editor,

　　I am a Grade 9 student．Recently we have made a survey-“To whom do you go when in trouble?”Here are the results．

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Yours Sincerely,

Wang Ping

Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： Dear Editor, 　　I am a Grade 9 student．Recently we have made a survey–“To whom do you go when in trouble?”Here are the results． 　　Most students will go to their classmates or friends when they have trouble because they are almost the same age．They can talk with and understand each other easily．Some will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful．Only a few solve their problems by themselves．They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with other people, either．They have few friends． 　　I think we’d better ask our teachers, parents, classmates, and friends for help when we are in trouble． Yours Sincerely, Wang Ping 　　評(píng)分說明： 　　1．短文通順完整，語法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤較少，書寫工整得15－20分。 　　2．短文較通順完整，有少量語法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤，書寫較工整得11－15分。 　　3．短文不夠通順完整，語法拼寫錯(cuò)誤較多，書寫不夠工整得6－10分。 　　4．短文不完整，語法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤多，書寫潦草得1－5分。