Question

【題目】書面表達

新的一年馬上就要開始了，王璐寫了一份新年計劃。請根據(jù)表格中的信息，以第一人稱的形式完成王璐的新年計劃。80個單詞左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】New Year's Resolutions

New Year is coming, so I make some New Year's resolutions.

First, I want to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. I'm going to practice it every day. Next, I want to get a lot of exercise to keep fit. I'm going to run every morning. Then, I want to improve my English because I want to get good grades. I'm going to read English books and write diaries in English. Finally, I want to be a school magazine's reporter because I like talking with people. I'm going to write articles.

I think I am able to keep them and I hope I am going to improve my life.

【解析】

本文要求根據(jù)表格中的信息，以第一人稱的形式完成王璐的新年計劃。寫作中會運用want to do sth.和be going to結(jié)構(gòu)。使用“WWH法”寫計劃和愿望：what: learn to play an instrument, get a lot of exercise, improve English, be a school magazine's reporter; why: like music very much, to keep fit, to get good grades, like talking with people; how：第3、5、7、9句。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，條理清晰，語句通順。

添彩點：作者將表格中提供的信息用“First, Next, Then, Finally”連在一起，使文章清晰。文中“so”的應用使句與句更好地連接。另外，文中用“because”處理表格中“Why”的回答，使句子更加連貫。