Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

三年快樂(lè)而充實(shí)的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來(lái)，你對(duì)高中生活充滿期待。請(qǐng)以“I expect my school life”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

要求：

1．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：(1)生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳、圖書(shū)館、運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)……)；(2)師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系；(3)生活多彩，學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步；(4)補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)自己的想法。

2．文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

提示詞語(yǔ)：get along with；colorful；knowledge；habit

Answer 1

【答案】I Expect My School Life
I will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me.
I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.
As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】 這篇短文多次使用連接詞and以及固定短語(yǔ)如be full of ，different kinds of，get along well with，at the same time，try one’s best等等，這些都為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。