Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分 20分）
假如你叫田甜，想應(yīng)聘學(xué)校的學(xué)生導(dǎo)游，今年署假陪同即將來(lái)校訪問(wèn)的美國(guó)朋友參觀徐州。要求你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文向?qū)W校推薦自己。

姓名	田甜	班級(jí)	九（4）班
性格特征	大膽、開(kāi)朗、隨和、樂(lè)于助人……
愛(ài)好特長(zhǎng)	看英語(yǔ)小說(shuō)、打籃球、旅游、交友……
相關(guān)經(jīng)歷	2012年在全校英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲第一名,熟悉徐州。
聯(lián)系方式	tiantian@163.com

 
注意：1.短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；
2.詞數(shù)90左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)；
3.文中不得提及考生所在的學(xué)校及自己的姓名；
My name is Tiantian.
                                                                              
                                                                             
                                                                              
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Answer 1

One possible version:
My name is Tian Tian. I’m in Class 4, Grade 9. I’m very brave, outgoing and easygoing. And I am helpful. I like traveling and making friends a lot. My favorite sport is basketball and I am very good at it. I enjoy reading English novels well. In 2012 I won the first price in the school English competition. Xuzhou is my hometown. It is a beautiful and clean city. There are many places of interest. I love it and I know it very well.
I really want to be a student guide for the American friends. I’d like to show them around our school and visit Xuzhou.
My e-mail address is tiantian@163.com.

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封自薦信。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。