Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

學(xué)校志愿者協(xié)會(huì)招募新成員，打算在寒假期間到本市兒童醫(yī)院和第五敬老院組織志愿者活動(dòng)。你決定去其中一個(gè)地方做志愿者。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用化名“李華”寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。

注意：

1．信中要包括以下要點(diǎn)：

(1)去哪個(gè)地方做志愿者；

(2)說(shuō)明原因；

(3)能做什么事情；

(4)對(duì)志愿者工作的感受或體會(huì)。

2．請(qǐng)選用下面表格中的提示詞語(yǔ)，并可結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

3．詞數(shù)：不少于60詞。

4．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。

(考生不得抄寫(xiě)已給出的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾，只需寫(xiě)考試題目所要求的內(nèi)容。)

Dear Chairman,

　　I am Li Hua, a student from Class Five, Grade Three．I know that you want new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them．

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　　I hope you’ll let me join your volunteer group．I’m looking forward to your reply．

　　With best wishes．

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Possible version 1：

　　I love reading books and I am good at history．I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help．Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer in this winter vacation?I will try my best to help the kids and make them happy by telling funny stories．I think volunteer work is great．It is not right for us to think about only ourselves．We should always think about people around us and try to make them happy．

　　Possible version 2：

　　Can I go to No．5 Old People’s Home to be a volunteer?I like helping old people because they need more help than others．Besides, I can learn a lot from them．My hobbies are singing and dancing．So I will sing some old songs for the old people to cheer them up．I can also clean windows for them to make their rooms bright．When I see they are happy, I feel happy, too．I think that being a volunteer is great!

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　第一檔：(13～15分)

　　完全符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想清楚且積極向上，內(nèi)容豐富。使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯，語(yǔ)言通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，具有邏輯性。

　　第二檔：(9～12分)

　　基本符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想基本清楚，內(nèi)容完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順，語(yǔ)意基本連貫。有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響整體理解。

　　第三檔：(5～8分)

　　部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，內(nèi)容不夠完整。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多，語(yǔ)言不通順，影響整體理解。

　　第四檔：(0～4分)

　　與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多，只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ)，所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。