Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備成立一個志愿者服務(wù)中心（service center),對當(dāng)?shù)氐睦先撕土羰貎和��?/span>left-behind children)提供幫助。假設(shè)你是李華，請寫一封申請書給負(fù)責(zé)人王老師申請加入。詞數(shù)80詞左右，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。

提示：

1.簡要介紹自己；

2.你的特長或愛好；

3.你對志愿者活動的看法；

4.你準(zhǔn)備如何去幫助他們。

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am Li Hua, a student from Grade 8.I want to join the school volunteer service center.

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I hope to be one of your team members.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I'm a thirteen-year-old boy with the skills and interests that can be useful for volunteering. I know something about health care which is of great importance to the old. I am fond of reading story books. Volunteering not only help others but also offer us a chance to experience life. I'm going to spend most of my spare time on volunteering. If I talk about health care with old people, I will help them keep healthy. I will tell the left-behind children stories to make them feel less lonely as well as cheer them up. I am sure I will make the world a better place.

【解析】

這是提綱作文。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)的順序?qū)懽骷纯桑�需適當(dāng)拓展內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容充滿愛，更符合志愿活動這個話題的感情色彩。

好單詞：

skill 技能

interest 興趣，愛好

volunteering 志愿活動

left-behind 留守的

lonely 孤單的

好短語：

be useful for 對……有用

be of great importance to 對……很重要

be fond of 喜歡

spend…on sth. 花費(fèi)……在某事上

cheer up 使振作

好句式：

I know something about health care which is of great importance to the old. 我知道一些關(guān)于醫(yī)療保健的知識，這對老年人非常重要。（定語從句，先行詞是health care，是抽象事物，關(guān)系代詞which在從句中作主語）

Volunteering not only help others but also offer us a chance to experience life. 志愿活動不僅幫助別人，而且給我們提供了一個體驗生活的機(jī)會。（not only…but also… 不但……而且……）

If I talk about health care with old people, I will help them keep healthy. 如果我和老年人談?wù)撫t(yī)療保健，我將幫助他們保持健康。（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，當(dāng)陳述將來之事時，時態(tài)遵循“主將從現(xiàn)”。）