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假如你是一個無錫新市民，你叫Luo Hui, 來自湖南，目睹了無錫最近幾年的發(fā)展和變化，有喜有憂。于是你就給政府有關部門發(fā)了一份e-mail，談了一些自己的想法，并提出了一些合理的建議，內容要點如下：

1．最近幾年無錫發(fā)展很快；比如，道路變寬了；城里可供人們休閑的場所也多了；這里的人們過著幸福的生活；

2．但是還存在一些嚴重的問題：房價太高，許多人根本買不起房子；因為工業(yè)的發(fā)展，水和空氣被嚴重污染；人們很難呼吸到新鮮空氣。

3．我的建議：……

注意：1．短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2．第3要點作2－3句話的適當發(fā)揮；

3．E-mail的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

4．詞數：80個詞左右。

Dear Sir or Madam,

　　How are you? It's my great pleasure to write this e-mail to you．

　　My name is Luo Hui．I'm a middle school student．I moved to Wuxi with my parents five years ago because my parents found work here．________________

Yours sincerely,

Luo Hui

Answer 1

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解析：

One possible version： 　　Wuxi has developed quickly．For example, the roads become wide．There are many places for people to relax．The people here are living a happy life． 　　But there are still some problems．The prices of the houses are too high．Many people can't afford to buy them at all．Water and air are badly/terribly/seriously polluted．It is difficult for people to breathe fresh air． 　　I think we should stop some factories from dumping their waste into the river．We should also encourage people to protect our environment．