Question

【題目】朋友是人生中的一大財(cái)富，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的寫作要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，介紹你最好的朋友Sally，同時(shí)分享一下你們維護(hù)彼此間友誼的心得。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。

寫作要點(diǎn)：

關(guān)于Sally	1. 外貌：一雙大眼睛，長長的頭發(fā)，和我一樣高； 2. 性格：待人友好，臉上經(jīng)常帶著微笑； 3. 興趣愛好：喜歡唱歌跳舞（和我一樣）。
維護(hù)友誼的心得	1. 每天一起騎自行車上學(xué), 周末一起到圖書館看書； 2. 下課后經(jīng)常一起聊天，分享快樂和煩惱； 3. 對(duì)彼此誠實(shí)，······(自擬一項(xiàng))

Sally is my best friends. We met at a party 10 years ago.____________________________________________

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I hope our friendship will last forever!

Answer 1

【答案】Sally is my best friends. We met at a party 10 years ago. Sally is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair. She is as tall as me. She’s always friendly to others and wears a big smile on her face. Both of us like singing and dancing. Every day we go to school by bike together. At the weekend, we go to the library to do some reading. We often talk with each other after class and share our happiness and worries. We are always honest to each other and help each other when we are in trouble.

I hope our friendship will last forever!

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair，as tall as me，be friendly to others，wear a big smile on her face，both of，like singing and dancing，go to school，by bike，at the weekend，do some reading，talk with each other，after class，by reading，be honest to，in trouble等。而with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)Sally is a beautiful girl with two big eyes and long hair.和She’s always friendly to others and wears a big smile on her face. / We often talk with each other after class and share our happiness and worries./ We are always honest to each other and help each other when we are in trouble.等并列結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。