文段表達(dá)。

根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ),寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯,不少于60詞的文段。

目前,許多同學(xué)學(xué)會(huì)了上網(wǎng)聊天。他們?cè)诮Y(jié)識(shí)新朋友,學(xué)習(xí)新東西的同時(shí),也遇到了很多問(wèn)題。下面是幾個(gè)同學(xué)的困惑,請(qǐng)你針對(duì)他們的問(wèn)題,談?wù)勀銓?duì)網(wǎng)上聊天的看法,并給他們提出一些可行性的建議。

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  Nowadays, more and more students like chatting with friends on line.While chatting, they make new friends and learn new things.But they also meet with some difficulties.Peter says some net-friends want to know his phone number.I don’t think we should tell strangers our phone numbers.Knowing our phone numbers, they might call us often.Sometimes we meet adults like John.If you have nothing to chat with them, skip it.You can just look for some information you like.George doesn’t know what to do if net-friends want to visit or invite him.In my opinion, if you want to see them, you had better ask your parents to go with you.Inviting them to your house is a good idea.In a word, if you are often on line, be careful.Don’t let strangers know you easily.(138 words)

  書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):

  第一檔:(15~13分)

  完全符合題目要求,觀點(diǎn)正確,要點(diǎn)齊全。句式多樣,詞匯豐富。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。

  第二檔:(12~9分)

  基本符合題目要求,觀點(diǎn)正確,要點(diǎn)齊全。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯基本滿足文章需要。語(yǔ)言基本通順,語(yǔ)意基本連貫,表達(dá)基本清楚。雖然有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,但不影響整體理解。

  第三檔:(8~5分)

  部分內(nèi)容符合題目要求,要點(diǎn)不齊全。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯(cuò)誤較多,語(yǔ)言不通順,表達(dá)不夠清楚,影響整體理解。

  第四檔:(4~0分)

  與題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容不多,只是簡(jiǎn)單拼湊提示詞語(yǔ),所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容難以理解。


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