Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某校正在開展“走進(jìn)新時(shí)代，爭當(dāng)合格中學(xué)生”的演講比賽，請以“We act, we improve” 為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，還應(yīng)該做些什么？ 演講稿應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.學(xué)會(huì)自立，誠實(shí)友善，舉止文明；

2.培養(yǎng)習(xí)慣，發(fā)展興趣，不斷創(chuàng)新；

3.關(guān)心他人，和諧相處，懂得感恩； 4. ……

要求：

1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；

3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加 2－3 分；

4.詞數(shù)：80 詞左右。開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

We act, we improve

Ladies and gentlemen,

We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

Answer 1

【答案】We act, we improve

Ladies and gentlemen,

We have entered a new era. As students, it’s our duty to study hard. But to be a qualified middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.

First, we should learn to be independent and honest. We’re supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should have good habits. Habits play an important role in our life. We’d better develop our interests and the ability to create. Third, we should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. Value the time we spend with our family and friends in our daily life. Last but not least, I think we should exercise more to keep healthy.

In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“We act，we improve”為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生除了學(xué)習(xí)課本知識(shí)之外，還應(yīng)該做些什么？結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I think……，F(xiàn)irst, we usually learn to……，Second, we should……，We must not……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用，不要漏掉任何一個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)，注意敘述順序符合邏輯關(guān)系。 可能用到的詞組：learn to do sth., be supposed to do, be friendly to sb., play an important role in, had better, the ability to create, care more about等等。

高分句型：

1. We should care more about others and be thankful to all the people who have helped us. 我們應(yīng)該更加關(guān)心別人，感謝所有幫助過我們的人。

care more about更加關(guān)心，be thankful to對(duì)……感恩，who have helped us.為定語從句，修飾先行詞the people。

2. In a word, the more we act, the better we will improve. 總之，我們行動(dòng)越多，我們的提高就越好。

兩個(gè)比較級(jí)的句子疊加，表示“越……越……”。