Question

當(dāng)今的社會(huì)，電腦起著很重要的作用，所以學(xué)生們經(jīng)常打字，忽視了英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中的書(shū)寫問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示和要求，寫一篇短文發(fā)表你的看法。
提示：(1) Why is students’ handwriting（書(shū)寫）very poor now?
(2) What should we do to improve it?
要求：1. 短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 短文中不得涉及真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。
3. 詞數(shù)：60~80個(gè)。
Handwriting is a basic skill in English study. However, nowadays many students’ handwriting is very poor.
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Answer 1

Handwriting is a basic skill in English study. However, nowadays many students’ handwriting is very poor.
They have their own reasons for their poor handwriting. First of all, they like an easy way of studying. They always type on the computer. Second, the teachers might not be very strict in students’ handwriting.
To improve students’ handwriting, in my opinion, the teachers and the students should work together. On one hand, the teachers should give more attention to students’ handwriting and ask the students to realize the importance of good handwriting from the very beginning of their English study. On the other hand, the students themselves are supposed to know that wonderful handwriting is a must in English study.
In a word, good handwriting is so important that both students and the teachers should try their best to achieve good handwriting.

試題分析：這篇作文是一個(gè)議論文，討論的話題是現(xiàn)在由于電腦的使用，很多學(xué)生不注意自己的書(shū)寫，題目要求我們對(duì)此發(fā)表自己的看法。在題目中的提示里，給出了我們這篇作文的要點(diǎn)，主要有兩個(gè)，一是學(xué)生們的書(shū)寫較差的原因，這里題目中只給了我們一個(gè)方面的原因，我們可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，給予補(bǔ)充；二是發(fā)表自己個(gè)人的看法，如何才能提高學(xué)生們的書(shū)寫。這一部分內(nèi)容完全靠自己的想象，這個(gè)意見(jiàn)一定要切合實(shí)際，要符合題目的要求。因此，在這篇作文中，學(xué)生們發(fā)揮的空間很大，這要看學(xué)生們平時(shí)的積累，以及用英語(yǔ)發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)和看法的能力。寫作時(shí)，注意語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確，表達(dá)流暢，意思完整。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文好在它的語(yǔ)言很流暢，使用句型豐富，表達(dá)富有感染力。這篇作文主要分為三個(gè)部分，首先作者分析了造成現(xiàn)在學(xué)生們書(shū)寫能力差的原因，一共是兩個(gè)，出來(lái)電腦的影響，作者又補(bǔ)充了一個(gè)，即老師對(duì)這方面的要求不嚴(yán)格。第二部分是本文的中心，作者給出了自己的意見(jiàn)，這一部分中作者使用了非常好的句型，如he teachers should give more attention to students’ handwriting and ask the students to realize the importance of good handwriting from the very beginning of their English study、the students themselves are supposed to know that wonderful handwriting is a must in English study.等。還有好的短語(yǔ)如in my opinion, on the one hand, on the other hand等。最后作者重申了自己的觀點(diǎn)，再次點(diǎn)題，首尾呼應(yīng)。這里作者使用了短語(yǔ)in a word來(lái)做總結(jié)，還用到了so…that句型。