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71. 英語課上老師組織了一次以“What will you do if you want to build a happier home？”為主題的討論，部分同學的想法被統(tǒng)計在表格里。請你根據表格的信息，用英語寫一篇短文，向�？�投稿。

Lin Hai	spend more time with family
Peter	share happiness and worries
Tina	remember family birthdays
I	...

要求：(1)開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，不少于70詞；(2)短文要包括表格所給的信息，適當發(fā)揮，并談談自己的想法；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關的信息，如姓名、學校等。

In our English class, we have a discussion about what we will do to make home a happier place. Here are some students' ideas. Lin Hai thinks

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Answer 1

【答案】In_our_English_class,_we_have_a_discussion_about_what_we_will_do_to_make_home_a_happier_place._Here_are_some_students'_ideas._Lin_Hai_thinks we may spend more time with family. We can watch TV shows together or take a walk after dinner. Peter says we should share happiness and worries more. As for Tina, she thinks we'd better remember family birthdays and send them small gifts. If you do so, your family will be happy. In my opinion, we can help with some housework. Then your parents will feel you are no longer a little child.

In a word, we all want to have a happy home and it's also our duty to build one. So let's try our best to make all of us happy.

【解析】

英語課上老師組織了一次以“What will you do if you want to build a happier home？”為主題的討論，部分同學的想法被統(tǒng)計在表格里。請你根據表格的信息，用英語寫一篇短文，向校刊投稿。本題給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前先要圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在和過去時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的搭配問題，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。