Question

【題目】假如你是第二中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生李雷，你要寫一封信給青少年專家Sigmund，告訴他你遇到的問題，并請(qǐng)求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的信息完成這封信。

姓名	李雷
生肖	羊
最喜歡的顏色	藍(lán)色，代表平靜，使人放松
個(gè)人特質(zhì)	善良、慷慨、自信，富有創(chuàng)造力
遇到的問題	1．喜歡打籃球，花很多時(shí)間在這上面：父母對(duì)你要求嚴(yán)格，不允 許你打·籃球，要求你放棄這個(gè)愛好： 2．作業(yè)太多，經(jīng)常熬夜，上課覺得疲憊； 3…．．(至少再補(bǔ)充1個(gè))
目前需求	希望得到建議

注意：

1詞數(shù)90左右。書信的開頭和結(jié)尾己寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

2書信須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，：

3書信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。(以下格式寫在答題紙上)

Dear Mr. Sigrnund,

I am writing to you to ask for your help.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lei

I like chatting on line, my mother says that is a bad habit. And sometimes I come home too late, my parents are not happy. They ask me to get home on time. I don’t know how to solve these problems. Can you give me some advice?

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Sigrnund,

I am writing to you to ask for your help.

My name is Li Lei. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School. I was born in the year of Goat. My favorite color is blue, because orange stands for happiness. I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds. I am also generous and confident. I am a creative boy.

Though I am a good boy, I also have problems. I like playing basketball and spend much time on it. But my parents are very strict with me. They don’t allow me to play it and demand me to give it up because they think it waste my study time. Another problem is that I often stay up to do my homework because I have too much homework. As a result, I often feel tired in class. In addition, I like chatting on line, my mother says that is a bad habit. And sometimes I come home too late, my parents are not happy. They ask me to get home on time. I don’t know how to solve these problems. Can you give me some advice?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Lei

【解析】

試題這是一篇材料作文，表中內(nèi)容就是本文的寫作要點(diǎn)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。