Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你校英語報一月份將開展“校園之星”(Star of the Campus)評選活動，請你根據圖中的信息，向校英語報寫一篇短文，介紹你心目中“校園之星”李華的情況。

提示詞：help…with, spare time, get along with, do housework

要求：

1．文章內容符合題意，可參考所給提示詞；

2．文中不得出現真實姓名、校名和地名；

3．詞數100左右(文章首段已給出，不計人總詞數)。

Our school will select(挑選)“Star of the Campus(校園)”in January. I think Li Hua is the most suitable one.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school will select (挑選)“Star of the Campus (校園)”in January. I think Li Hua is the most suitable one．

At school, Li Hua studies very hard at his lessons, so he is always one of the top students in our class. He also love sports. He often plays soccer at weekends with his friends. What’s more, he cares for other students, and he always helps them with their lessons after class.

At home, he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time. Besides, Li Hua gets along well with his neighbors. This is why Li Hua is so popular.

In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need. He sets a good example for us.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，圖片中呈現的是李華在日常生活中所做的不同的事情，寫作前要認真閱讀圖片信息，選擇合適的短語來表達，在時態(tài)的運用上，要使用一般現在時態(tài)。主語為第三人稱，并注意主謂一致，可適當使用連詞，使文章更流暢。

寫作亮點：文章簡單介紹了李華在日常生活中所做的不同的事情。時態(tài)及動詞短語的把握上非常到位。So, What’s more, Besides, In short 的使用，使文章語意連貫，條理清晰。最后一句總結In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need. He sets a good example for us.增加了文章的感情色彩，起到畫龍點晴的作用。