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【題目】作文

請以The hero in my heart.為題，寫一篇短文。

要求：語句通順，條理清晰，字數(shù)80-100單詞左右

Answer 1

【答案】

The hero in my heart

There are lots of famous persons in the world and they are like stars in the sky.But the best lightest one in my heart is Liu Xiang.I think he is a real hero.

Many years ago,all the people in the world think that Asians are not good at running.However,Liu Xiang changed their minds.He got the first place!This was the first Asian to win 110m hurdles at the Olympic Games.When Liu Xiang faced the other strong runners,the only mind in his heart was “I believe I can.” He ran like a flying horse.He tried his best.At last he won the Olympic championship.

There was a joyful atmosphere everywhere in China when we knew he won.We cried for his success.We can imagine how hard he worked to prepare for the race.

Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart.I hope he can do better in the 2008 Olympic Games.Good luck to you,Liu Xiang!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達是一篇命題作文。請以The hero in my heart.為題，寫一篇短文。話題貼近學(xué)生生活，使學(xué)生易于發(fā)揮。在寫作時要做到層次分明，段落清楚。人稱為第三人稱，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確，要點要齊全，內(nèi)容要合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)要連貫，還應(yīng)滿足詞數(shù)要求。

寫作亮點：該文內(nèi)容合理，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，段落清晰，要點齊全。