Question

【題目】根據(jù)所給的短語(yǔ)提示，描寫(xiě)一下地震發(fā)生的時(shí)候Benny是怎么做的。
Sandra: I was almost asleep when I felt the bed rocking. Suddenly I noticed our blinds(百頁(yè)窗) moving. So I quickly looked around to see what was happening. I found my ceiling fan was moving although I had turned it off a moment ago. I quickly woke up my children and we left the building as quickly as possible.

feel my chair moving and see the computer shaking hear noises coming from the shaking window see what is going on shake as if it is going to fall wake up my housemates

Benny: I was in my office

Answer 1

【答案】Benny: I was in my office when I felt my chair moving and saw the computer shaking. Suddenly I heard noises coming from my shaking windows. So I quickly looked around to see what was going on. The ceiling fan was shaking as if it was going to fall. I quickly woke up my housemates and we left the building as quickly as possible.
【解析】這個(gè)題目要求我們根據(jù)所給的短語(yǔ)提示，描寫(xiě)一下地震發(fā)生的時(shí)候Benny是怎么做的。這些短語(yǔ)都是按照事情發(fā)生的順序給出的，因此我們寫(xiě)的時(shí)候不用做順序上的調(diào)整。需要注意的是，首先是要正確的時(shí)態(tài)，以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意動(dòng)詞形式的變化；其次是使用正確的主語(yǔ)，因?yàn)轭}目中給出的大多是一些動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，我們串聯(lián)成句時(shí)，要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)闹髡Z(yǔ)，也可以加上一些修飾詞，如副詞、形容詞等，以符合當(dāng)時(shí)的場(chǎng)景。