Emily 將她的煩惱寫在了博客上并征求大家的建議。請了解她的煩惱并寫出你(Chen Lin)的 建議, 要求字?jǐn)?shù)在 90 詞左右, 建議的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出, 不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
寫作提示:
1、孩子應(yīng)如何對待父母;
2、父母對我們的成長有哪些幫助;
3、我們應(yīng)如何與父母溝通;
參考詞匯: respect v & n. 尊重; responsible adj. 有責(zé)任感的; demand v. & n. 要求
Here are Emily’s problems on the Blog:
My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(嘮叨) how I should keep my room clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night! None of my friends have got such terrible parents. What should I do?
Emily, USA
Hi, Emily. I think it’s lucky for you to have such good parents.__________________________
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Chen Lin
評分要求:(一)評分說明:
1.卷面書寫:1分;2.內(nèi)容:9分(要點(diǎn)5分,連貫4分);3.語法結(jié)構(gòu)、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn):4分;4.字?jǐn)?shù):1分。
(二)評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
一類(13—15分):寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),語句流暢,無語法或基本無語法錯(cuò)誤,字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到要求,基本無單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤;
二類(10—12分):寫出大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),語句較流暢,基本無語法錯(cuò)誤,有少量單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤;
三類(7—9分):寫出部分要點(diǎn)、語句基本通順,有少量語法錯(cuò)誤,有少量單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤;
四類(4—6分):寫出少量內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),有較多的語句不通順,語法、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多,只有少量句子表達(dá)正確;
五類(0—3分):基本上沒有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),語法、單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤較多,基本上沒有通順的句子,只寫出一些單詞,不知所云。
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My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about (嘮叨) how I should keep my room clean, keep
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