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【題目】寫作

最近，你們班就“是否應該幫助陌生人”展開了討論，同學們就這一話題意見不一，你的看法如何?根據(jù)所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”為題，寫一篇短文。

	原因
贊成	幫助他人是美德； 幫助他人就是幫助自己；
反對	怕陷入麻煩； 怕被誤解；
你的觀點?（至少兩點）

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。

參考詞匯：美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

Should We Help Strangers?

Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．Different students have different opinions．

Some think we should try to help strangers． Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves．We may come across some trouble and need others' help some day．If everyone isn't willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．

However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble．Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness．

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble．If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love．

【解析】

試題分析：該提示一篇話題作文，屬議論文。討論的話題是“是否應該幫助陌生人”，有正反兩方面的觀點。要點都給了出來。本文題型是考生非常熟悉的正反觀點類的議論文，在平時的練習中也有相應的模板。審題時注 意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主，發(fā)表個人意見時使用第一人稱。本文的要點均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級的詞匯詞組如 be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當使用一至兩句諺語如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】：本文中連接詞的使用很到位，如and，but，However， In my opinion等。文章還多次使用主從復合句，這些都為該文增色不少。