Question

【題目】書面表達(dá), 根據(jù)表格信息完成一篇短文

以下兩張是你的全家福和你自己房間的照片。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片和表格介紹這兩張圖片。

The photo of your family	The photo of your room
Names, ages, jobs(職業(yè))，phone numbers	3 things, colors, sizes(大小)， where they are

要求：1. 仔細(xì)審題，作文必須包括題目中所有內(nèi)容，文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。

2. 必須有至少一個(gè)復(fù)數(shù)句型。

3. 適當(dāng)使用連詞。

4. 銜接自然，邏輯清晰，注意層次清楚。

5. 書面規(guī)范，卷面整潔，80詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】My family and my room

Hello, I'm Yang Ping. Here are two pictures. One is my family photo. The man is my father.His name is Yang Lin. He is 40 this year. He works in a hospital. This woman is my mother. She is a teacher. My parents are very kind to others. Sure! the boy between them is me. I am a student.

The other photo is my room. Is it beautiful? Look! There are many toys on the floor. The desk is under the window. It's about half a metre high. A reading lamp is on the desk. It's not big but very nice. And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk. I love my room, and I love my families better.

【解析】

Hello, I'm Yang Ping. Here are two pictures. One is my family photo. The man is my father.His name is Yang Lin. He is 40 this year. He works in a hospital. This woman is my mother. She is a teacher. My parents are very kind to others. Sure! the boy between them is me. I am a student.

The other photo is my room. Is it beautiful? Look! There are many toys on the floor. The desk is under the window. It's about half a metre high. A reading lamp is on the desk. It's not big and very nice. And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk. I love my room. I love my families better.

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如one …the other，in a hospital，be kind to others，on the floor，under the window，about half a metre high，in front of等。特別是there be結(jié)構(gòu)句式There are many toys on the floor.和定語(yǔ)從句And my chair on which I sit to study is in front of the desk.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。