Question

暑假就要到了，某社團(tuán)將組織部分青年參加一些志愿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)面前的海報(bào)和你個(gè)人特長(zhǎng)，選擇參加其中兩項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，談?wù)勀氵x擇它們的原因以及你準(zhǔn)備具體做些什么？（詞數(shù)80左右）


☆★☆  Visit Old People’s Home
☆★☆  Teach in the Village School
☆★☆  Help Clean Up the City Parks
☆★☆  Help Sick Children in the Hospital
Come and join us!

Answer 1

Dear Sir，
I am a middle student. I want to be a volunteer to help people. I think I’m the person who can get on well with the old. Although I’m busy, I still want to visit Old People’s Home as a volunteer. More than doing some cleaning for the old, performing a play with my friends is another thing I can do.
If I had another chance, I would help sick children in the hospital. I love children and I plan to put this love to good use by working in the hospital with sick children.
In a word. I would like to help people who need help. Please call me up—62878888.
Warm-hearted

解析試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，注意從四項(xiàng)活動(dòng)中選取兩項(xiàng)進(jìn)行描寫。然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文的寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。