Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

目前，我國實(shí)施城市化進(jìn)程中，給從鄉(xiāng)村遷入城市的大多數(shù)孩子帶來諸多的問題，特別在交朋友方面尤為突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony發(fā)電子郵件請(qǐng)教你關(guān)于如何交朋友的問題，請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件提幾點(diǎn)建議，詞數(shù)約80左右。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.在小區(qū)內(nèi)玩耍時(shí)，你可以主動(dòng)與他們交流成為新朋友，并告知家長；

2.請(qǐng)求父母帶你去圖書館或一些公共場所，既可認(rèn)識(shí)更多伙伴又可參加文體活動(dòng)；

3.在周末，可外出參加各類活動(dòng)等。

總之，多參加交流活動(dòng)，克服困難，保持耐心。

要求：

1.涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，意思連貫，符合邏輯。

2.卷面整潔、書寫規(guī)范工整。 作文的開頭結(jié)尾已給出， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Know,

I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?

Yours,

Tony

Dear Tony,

There are lots of things you can do.

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I hope you will find a best friend soon!

Yours,

Know

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kids. You can take an art class or join a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can go out to take part in activities on Sundays. You can try making friends in them too. What’s more, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon!

Yours,

Know

【解析】

本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是以 how to make friends為主旨用英語寫一篇短文，以電子郵件的方式呈現(xiàn)．這類話題是學(xué)生常見的話題，寫起來較為簡單，其要點(diǎn)主要為3小點(diǎn)，注意在文章中這3點(diǎn)必須都包括，除了這3點(diǎn)，還可以適當(dāng)做出補(bǔ)充．由于是給別人提出一些建議，所以時(shí)態(tài)確定為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱根據(jù)文章的需要可確定為第二人稱．重點(diǎn)短語及句型有：try to do sth，．You should…，What’s more…等及表示順序的詞，first，second， third等。