Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

發(fā)展中的中國，使我們的生活變得越來越好。請根據(jù)下面提示，以“Changes around us”為題用英語寫一篇短文。

要求：1．不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名；2．短文需要包括所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3．詞數(shù)不少于90詞 (文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Changes around us

Great changes have taken place in our life around us．___________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Changes around us

Great changes have taken place in our life around us. We have more opportunities to go abroad. We can travel online even at home. It became a reality to enjoy the beauty of the world without going out. Through the Internet, we can do more reading and more group work. It is very helpful for our work and studies. In transportation, besides driving, we can also take high-speed trains. There are many new high ways and flyovers. It's a few hours' journey from my hometown to Beijing.

Shopping is easy, too. We can go to any shops and supermarkets to select anything we like. I feel happy and comfortable to live in such a society.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如take place，in our life，around us，go abroad，travel online，become a reality，do more reading，be helpful for，from my hometown to Beijing，live in such a society等。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)It became a reality to enjoy the beauty of the world without going out./ Shopping is easy, too./ I feel happy and comfortable to live in such a society.和復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)We can go to any shops and supermarkets to select anything we like.的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。