Question

【題目】 Writing.

Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied(欺凌)at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:

1. Some common forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. (At least two examples)

2. Some effects(影響) on the students who have been bullied at school. (At least two effects)

3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. (At least three solutions)

Answer 1

【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide.

First, because students spend most of their time in school and it's the school's responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校的欺凌事件。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。