Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

書是人類的朋友，書是人類進(jìn)步的階梯。在所有讀過的書中，假設(shè)The Adventures of Tom Sawyer是你最喜愛的書。請(qǐng)以“My favourite book”為題，介紹這本書并闡述你喜歡這本書的原因。80詞左右。

參考詞匯：name of the book; writer; story; place; hero/character; favourite scene; theme

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Answer 1

【答案】My favourite book

My favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. He lives with his aunt Polly. His aunt is very strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with his best friend, Huck Finn. With Huck, he goes looking for treasure. With another friend, Becky, he gets lost in a cave, and finally they find a box of gold.

Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important characters. Huck is an outsider. Becky is pretty with fair hair. And Injun Joe is the bad man of the story.

The themes of the story are to do with children growing up and becoming more serious.

【解析】

本文要求以My favorite book為題，介紹《湯姆索亞歷險(xiǎn)記》這本書并闡述你喜歡這本書的原因。按照提示，首先，本篇作文可以按照四個(gè)步驟來(lái)寫：（1）介紹這本書的書名和作者（第一段1-2句）；（2）介紹這本書的主角（第一段第3句）；（3）介紹自己喜歡這本書的原因（第二段第3-6句）；（4）介紹自己的閱讀感悟（第二段第7-8句）。其次，注意文章時(shí)態(tài)要運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)銜接緊密，行文連貫。必要時(shí)使用亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)，如：enjoy doing, kinds of, for many reasons, be interested in, fight against, bring into, work out等；好的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如：First of all, in fact, so…that…, I think等，使語(yǔ)言更加簡(jiǎn)潔，結(jié)構(gòu)更加合理。再次，再檢查單詞是否有拼寫錯(cuò)誤，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否有使用錯(cuò)誤。