Question

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假設(shè)你是李華，最近你校組織了一場討論。討論的主題是：本市要不要修地鐵(subway)？請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給某報社編輯寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

要求：

1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；

3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

4)不得使用真實姓名和校名等。

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

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Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

　　Sixty percent of the students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other forms of transport, they think, the subway is more convenient, faster and safer．It can save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the ground less crowded and reduce traffic accidents．

　　However, forty percent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subway will cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways and railways instead with the money．What's more, building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．

　　I think a subway is a sign of a modern city．By building a subway, we can travel around our city more easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building the subway．

　　評分標準：

　　一檔文17－20分：寫出全部內(nèi)容要點，層次清楚、語言流暢，有句式變化，基本無語法錯誤(1-2個錯誤)，或有少量由于使用復雜結(jié)構(gòu)而引起的語法或拼寫錯誤，但不影響意義理解。

　　二檔文13－16分：基本寫出全部內(nèi)容要點，層次清楚、語言流暢，有少量語法錯誤(3－4個錯誤)。

　　三檔文9－12分：寫出大部分內(nèi)容要點，語言基本通順，有一些語法和拼寫錯誤，基本不影響意思表達。

　　四檔文5－8分：寫出一半左右有關(guān)內(nèi)容要點，語言不太通順，語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、錯誤較多，只有少數(shù)句子可讀，影響理解。

　　五檔文0－4分：言不達意，不知所云；只有(1－2個)句子可讀。