Question

根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇日記，記錄4月14日（星期天）你和你的朋友李明

一起參觀南通博物館的經(jīng)過(guò)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)
距離	博物館離家約五公里
交通工具	騎自行車(chē)
時(shí)間	八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，十二點(diǎn)回家
內(nèi)容	看到了許多照片、實(shí)物等，看見(jiàn)了許多孩子和他們的家長(zhǎng)
收獲與感受	……（請(qǐng)考生自擬至少兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

 

要求：1. 詞數(shù)：90左右，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine

Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine

Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.

It is about 5 kilometres away from my home. So we went there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. It took us half an hour to get there. At the museum we saw many photos and other interesting things. Some of them are very old. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. They were also very interested in those things. At twelve we left the museum for home.

Today we (have) learned a lot about the history of Nantong. Although we were very tired, we felt very happy. What a wonderful day!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇記述文，介紹參觀南通博物館的經(jīng)過(guò)。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題。人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。本文主要按照時(shí)間關(guān)系進(jìn)行敘述，寫(xiě)作適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。