Question

【題目】回顧三年的初中生活，父母的教誨與支持始終伴你成長，使你進步。那些發(fā)生在你與父母之間的故事，看似平淡卻值得回味與珍藏。請以 “The Story of My Progress (進步)” 為題，寫一篇文章。

參考要點：1. 描述初中階段，你與父母之間的關系(親密，疏遠…)

2. 講述一件發(fā)生在你與父母之間的事情(起因，經過，結果…)；

3. 談談你的感受(感動，懷念，影響……)。

要求：1. 故事必須原創(chuàng)；

2. 120詞左右；

3. 文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。

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Answer 1

【答案】My progress has connected with my mother．

Three years ago，I was a shy girl．I was afraid to speak in public．My mother was worried about that．One day，my mother heard that a speech competition would be held in my school．She encouraged me to take part in the activity．At first，I was shocked by her advice，but I did not want to let her down，so I agreed．During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice． I still remembered that day clearly．When I won the first prize，my mother smiled happily．

Now I am an outgoing and confident girl．Thanks to my mother's encouragement and company，I have made such great progress

【解析】

這篇文章屬于一篇記敘文，需要回顧一件與父母相處的往事，要寫清楚整個事件的原委，包括起因經過結果，通過這個故事來表達自己取得的一些進步，父母帶給自己的影響以及自己內心的感動。寫作的時候需要注意正確使用過去時態(tài)。舉個例子，可以講一下自己小時候不愿意在公共場合講話，學校將會有一場演講比賽，媽媽鼓勵我參加活動，并且為我提供幫助，帶我去公園練習，最后獲得了獎項，最后自己變得非常自信，表達對媽媽的鼓勵和陪伴的感謝。用到的短語及表達可以有：speak in public 在公共場合說話，worried about 擔心，encouraged me to 鼓勵我去做…，take part in the activity 參加活動，was shocked by 被…震驚，let her down讓她失望，encouragement and company 鼓勵和陪伴，made such great progress取得如此大的進步。