Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是陽光中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李平。你的英國筆友Henry向你請教成語“守株待兔”。請你給他寫一封郵件, 內(nèi)容包括： (1) 描述故事；(2) 概括寓意。

注意： (1) 詞數(shù)90左右。(2) 郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。

下圖供參考。參考詞匯：野兔（hare）；樹樁（tree stump）

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

In ancient China, there was a farmer. Though he worked on his farm, his harvest could only support his own life. The farmer wanted to change his life, but he was too lazy to work hard every day.

One day, something amazing happened. The farmer was working on the farm. Suddenly, he heard a strange noise. He looked around and saw a little hare under a tree stump. It ran too fast so it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy, and he took the rabbit home and cooked a big meal. From then on, he didn’t work any more. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he died. Obviously, he was not so lucky. Moreover, because nobody took care of the crops in the field, they all died.

This story tells us we should not always follow the past experience, we should fix new problems with new ways. Also, it warned us never to expect to gain without working.

【解析】

該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。承接短文開頭；第二段敘述“守株待兔”這一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并結(jié)尾。注意：1. 根據(jù)作文要求，使用第三人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容。時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)為主，用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)描述場景。2. 描述故事時(shí)，要用場景描寫，故事發(fā)生的背景、起因和過程要交代清楚。3. 根據(jù)寫在內(nèi)容，可以采用work hard、bump into、from then on、day after day、depend on、come from等短語；使用there be、until和while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，too…to…、so…that…、not…any more等句型和結(jié)構(gòu)。