Question

【題目】Write at least 60 words with the topic “The most unforgettable experience”. 請你以“最難忘的經(jīng)歷”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。.

提示：在每個人的成長過程中，肯定都有令人難忘的經(jīng)歷，給人帶來深刻的印象，對人的成長具有重要的作用。請你就其中的一件最難忘的事進(jìn)行描述，與大家分享。

要求：內(nèi)容切題、語句通順、意思連貫、字跡清楚。

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

unforgettable experiences, the most unforgettable, Why is it …?

Answer 1

【答案】

One day on my way to school， I ran across a traffic accident， in which a boy was seriously injured by a motorcycle. I rushed to his rescue instinctively. I lifted him in my arms and hailed a taxi， which took us quickly to nearby hospital. After emergency treatment， the boy came to himself. I felt at ease when I knew that he had only suffered from minor bone fractures and would rceover in a couple of weeks. I left the hospital without giving my name， but my heart was full of joy and peace. Not until then did I understand the meaning of the proverb：“Helping others is the source of happiness.”This may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如I lifted him in my arms and hailed a taxi， which took us quickly to nearby hospital. After emergency treatment， the boy came to himself.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。