Question

【題目】【湖南省張家界市2015年中考英語試題】寫段落（共1題，滿分15 ）

根據(jù)圖文提示寫一篇短文介紹Le Pen.（要寫標題，并適當補充內(nèi)容使文意連貫完整。不少于50詞。）

	What is it?	Le Pen.
	What is it used for?	Writing and playing music.
	Why can it play music?	Because it has a music player planted inside.
	How can it play music?	Write on paper with it.

Answer 1

【答案】

Writing with music

This is Le Pen. It is a pen. You can use it to write. But it is not only a pen but also a music player. With a music player planted inside, Le Pen plays music while you write on paper. The music stops when you stop writing. So if you want to enjoy more of your favorite songs, keep on writing. Do you like listening to music while doing homework? If you do ,you will like Le Pen.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是圖表式作文，圖表式作文是說明文的一種，要認真解讀圖表，切勿疏漏重要數(shù)據(jù)信息和細節(jié)提示，不必每個數(shù)據(jù)都涉及，但重要數(shù)據(jù)必須提到。對圖表中的內(nèi)容分析、數(shù)據(jù)說明一定要簡明扼要，盡量使用簡單句，因為復(fù)雜的句式往往起不到清晰表達的效果。結(jié)論性的表達要從圖表信息分析或數(shù)據(jù)歸納而來，這樣才能使得語言有說服力，切忌主觀判斷，更不能主觀臆造。

寫作亮點：本文敘述清楚，簡明扼要地回答了“是什么，干什么，為什么，怎樣”幾個方面的問題，讓人們對這款新產(chǎn)品的特點和功能一目了然。文中也用到了when，while引出的時間狀語從句；用了if引出的條件狀語從句；用了分詞短語作狀語：while doing…；用了not only…but also…等結(jié)構(gòu)，這些都使短文增色不少。