Question

書面表達
請以“My Vacation”為題寫一篇短文。假如你是 Mike，你印象最深的是去年暑假和家人一起去鄉(xiāng)下（countryside）的爺爺家。鄉(xiāng)下的空氣很好，天氣也不錯；你和爺爺去爬山、釣魚（go fishing），和堂弟去游泳；奶奶每天都給你做好吃的。你們過得很愉快。
要求50詞左右，文章的開頭已給出。
My Vacation
I remembered my last summer vacation.                                        
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            
                                                                            

Answer 1

I remembered my last summer vacation. My family and I went to see my grandparents in the countryside. The air there is fresh, and the weather there was good, too.I went to the mountains and went fshing with my grandfather. And I went swimming with my cousin. My grandmother cooked delicious food for us every day. We had a great time.

試題分析：本書面表達是有關一次郊游的，書寫時首先我們應該確定用第一人稱；由于是上周，所以應該用過去時。寫作時，注意句型和短語的應用，應該符合英語的表達習慣和語法結構。另外，還應該注意提示信息。
點評：書寫本文時應該，注意交代清楚郊游的時間，地點，人物，以及感受。特別是寫感受，應該深刻。