Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

每個(gè)人都有自己的夢想和理想，為了理想而努力可以成就一個(gè)人的事業(yè)。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢想。

要求：1.參考提內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

2. 語句通順，意思連貫， 書寫工整

3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)（姓名、校名和地名等）；

4. 詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）

My Dream

Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My Dream

Everybody has his dream. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up.I really like writing becauseit is amazing to share my thoughts and feelings with others.

To realize my dream,I’m going to study Chinese hard. It’s very important for me.I am going to read a lot.There are so many great writers that I can always learn a lot from their works.What’s more,I plan to keep on writing so that I can improve my writing through practice.

All in all,I know it is not easy to realize my dream but I will try my best and never give up.

【解析】

本文是一篇話題作文。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇英文短文，向同學(xué)們介紹一下自己的夢想。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。