Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假如你是Cindy。好朋友不一定要一樣，你的兩個(gè)最好的朋友Eric和Lily就與你有很大不同。請結(jié)合下列要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文介紹你和你的的朋友們（可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充）。

要點(diǎn)：

要求： 1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。

My best friends and I

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Answer 1

【答案】

My best friends

I have two best friends.They are Eric and Lily.Many people think friends should be same.But I think I am different from my friends.I am quiet.I like reading very much.I read books every day.I am the hardest among us.My Engish is best.Eric is the most outgoing.He likes playing basketball.He plays it four times a week.He studies hard.His maths needs help.Lily is outgoing.She plays the piano once a day.She studies hard.His maths needs help.Lily is outgoing.She plays the piano once a day.She studies harder than Eric.He is good at Chinese.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己的兩個(gè)最好的朋友Eric和Lily就與你有很大不同，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如But I think I am different from my friends.I am quiet.I like reading very much.I read books every day.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。