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【題目】【2014年江蘇省宿遷市中考】時間都去哪兒了？這是許多成年人的感慨，也是一些中學(xué)生的煩惱：沒有時間做作業(yè)，沒有時間從事個人愛好… …

其實(shí)，時間就在我們的掌握之中，關(guān)鍵是能否合理利用。請根據(jù)提示，以“How to spend our time properly”為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)80左右。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點(diǎn)，可作必要的發(fā)揮；

3. 條理清楚、語句連貫；

4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名等信息。

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

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If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

Answer 1

【答案】

How to spend our time properly

Where has our time gone? How should we spend our time properly?

As students, it is important for us to study, so we should make a plan for every day. Most of all, we should listen carefully in class. For homework, we need to make a list and work out how much time we need, and then finish them one by one. Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies. They can make us feel happy and confident. But we don’t need to spend so much time on them. So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies.

In other ways, we need time, too. For example, we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends.

If so, I’m sure we will live a happier school life.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文是讓寫出學(xué)生自己是怎樣合理安排時間的，在不同的時間都做些什么事情，所以句子的時態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。根據(jù)已經(jīng)給出的短文第二句可知這里的人稱以第一人稱we來寫。這里不要寫成第一人稱單數(shù)了，要注意上下文的銜接和高級詞匯的運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和固定句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：make a plan for ；make a list ；make sb do sth；spend some time in doing sth ;it is+形容詞+ for sb to do sth等。文章用了一些連詞if，and，but，so等，使句子的結(jié)構(gòu)不再單一。為了上下文的銜接用了一些過渡詞如：most of all,then, in other ways等。