Question

【題目】書面表達

發(fā)明改變了我們的生活，帶給了我們方便快捷。請結(jié)合生活實際，展示部分偉大的發(fā)明成果，比如輪子、照相機、燈等，并說明它們在我們生活中的重要性。

要求：語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整，可適當發(fā)揮。詞數(shù)不少于80。

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Answer 1

【答案】We know there have been many great inventions in the world. They have changed the way we live. For example, the first great invention was the wheel. It is still very important today. This made it easier to carry heavy things and to travel long distances. Then many great inventions were made, such as the camera, the light and the radio. These all play a big part in our life today.

I think new inventions will allow us to do things we have never dreamed of before. In a word, more inventions are needed. As students, we should study hard. One day, we will have our own new inventions.

【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如in the world，such as，for example，make sth./sb.+adj.，such as，play a part in our life，allow sb. to do，dreamed of，in a word，study hard，our own new inventions等。而We know there have been many great inventions in the world./ I think new inventions will allow us to do things we have never dreamed of before.等多種賓語從句的運用，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。