Question

【題目】書面表達（滿分15分）

假設你是Linda，你們學校志愿者協(xié)會招募新成員，打算在假期到本市兒童醫(yī)院組織志愿者活動。你決定加入他們，去參加這個志愿者活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一份申請信。

注意：1. 文中必須包括提示中的要點，并作適當補充；

2. 80詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

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Yours,

Linda

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairman,

I’m Linda, a student from Class Five, Grade Eight. I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.

I love kids and I really hope they can feel better with my help. Can I go to Children’s Hospital to be a volunteer during this vacation? I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories. I think volunteering is great. And we should always think about people around us.

I hope I can be a member of your volunteer group. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Linda.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中已經(jīng)給出了很多信息和要點。在寫作時，要注意審題，不要遺漏要點。從題目可知，這篇文章是學校志愿者協(xié)會招募新成員，要求寫的一封申請信，所以要用第一人稱寫，可以用一般現(xiàn)在時。在組織語言的時候，要注意表達的準確性。句子要完整，表達要清晰，句子之間要流暢。

寫作亮點：這篇文章緊扣材料，內(nèi)容完整，表達清晰，整體通順流暢。里面不乏好的短語和句子。文中用到了一些好的句式 I know you need new members for your volunteer group and I want to be one of them.；I will try my best to help the kids and cheer them up by telling them funny stories也讓文章增色不少。