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書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你叫張霖，暑假后就要進(jìn)入高中(senior middle school)學(xué)習(xí)。由于住校(live at school)與住在家里各有利弊，你想通過(guò)e-mail征求英國(guó)筆友Bill的意見(jiàn)。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括住宿、飲食、交通等幾個(gè)方面。

注意：1、字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在100詞左右。

2、不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名。

3、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不記入總數(shù)。

Dear Bill,

　　How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much．So I’m writing to ask for your advice．

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　　It’s so hard for me to make a decision．I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions．

　　Please write back soon．

Zhang Lin

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解析：

One possible version： 　　Dear Bill, 　　How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much．So I’m writing to ask for your advice． 　　I’m going to study in the senior middle school in September．I can live either at school or at home．But I can’t decide because both have advantages and disadvantages． 　　At home, I have my own room．So I can have a good sleep．However, I have to share one room with 5-6 students at school．Maybe I can’t sleep well．It’s a problem．Although I can have better food at home, I enjoy eating with my classmates．I think it’s great fun and I can make more friends．If I live at home, I’ll have to ride to school．It’s a waste of time and not safe． 　　It’s so hard to make a decision．I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions． 　　Please write back soon． Zhang Lin 　　評(píng)分說(shuō)明： 　　要求考生用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、句式和詞語(yǔ)，完整準(zhǔn)確地表述所提示的內(nèi)容，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。分四檔評(píng)分： 　　1、短文通順完整，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，13－15分； 　　2、短文較通順完整，表達(dá)基本清楚，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，9－12分； 　　3、能寫(xiě)明基本要點(diǎn)，短文不夠通順完整，語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤，但尚能達(dá)意，5－8分； 　　4、僅能寫(xiě)明部分要點(diǎn)，短文不完整，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)，0－4分。