Question

假如你是Zhang Xue,你在申請參加一個目的地為美國的夏令營活動,請你用英語寫一份申請。申請的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。要點如下：
1. 參加的目的是為了提高英語和了解美國文化；
2. 愛好運動和流行音樂；
3. 希望住在有三到四個孩子的美國家庭。
4. 適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮自己的興趣愛好。
注意:字?jǐn)?shù)60-80詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總數(shù)字；文章不要提及真實的校名和人名。
參考詞匯：①summer camp n. (夏令營)；
②American culture n. (美國文化) ；
③pop music n.流行音樂
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Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:
I want to join in the summer camp. It’s a good way to improve my English and help me to know more about American culture .
I often surf the Internet for something new. I love sports and pop music. I do well in English and talk with foreigners freely. I’m very proud of it.
I hope to stay in a large American family with three or four children . I’m sure we will have a great time together.
I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。所給要點比較詳細(xì)。在寫作時要做到語句準(zhǔn)確，不遺漏任何一個要點，也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能脫離主題。本文應(yīng)以第一人稱書寫，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】該文語言規(guī)范，準(zhǔn)外地表達(dá)了每一個要點。文中使用了一些短語如do well in、be proud of、have a great time等，為文章增色不少。