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【題目】我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國(guó)文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，上周日參加了學(xué)校組織的志愿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)勀銈內(nèi)チ四睦�，你做了什么，以及你的感受�?/span>

提示詞語(yǔ)：Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired，proud

提示問題：● Where did you go?

● What did you do?

● How did you feel?

Last Sunday

Answer 1

【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.Though we are tired,we had a good time.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹周日參加的學(xué)校組織的志愿活動(dòng)。動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；以提示的問題作為寫作的主線，重點(diǎn)從三個(gè)方面去寫作：1.你去了什么地方？2.你在活動(dòng)中做了什么？3.你感覺怎么樣？結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。在談到自己感受的時(shí)候用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。