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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識(shí)，提高自我保護(hù)能力，學(xué)校開(kāi)展了以”安全”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。

1. 慎重交友

2. 遇險(xiǎn)報(bào)警

3. 安全飲食

4. 其他(1-2點(diǎn))

注意：1)內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

2)表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范;

3)詞數(shù)80左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：be careful， on line， danger， call for， go bad

How to keep safe?

As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind。 But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions。

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Answer 1

【答案】How to keep safe?

As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some

of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first !

【解析】本文要求寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)怎樣保證安全的演講稿。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)。寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文。其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1. 慎重交友 尤其是網(wǎng)上交友2. 遇險(xiǎn)報(bào)警 內(nèi)容可以是當(dāng)遇到危難，保持冷靜，報(bào)警求助等。3. 安全飲食 內(nèi)容可以是買(mǎi)或者吃食物要仔細(xì)，看日期，是否變質(zhì)，… 4. 其他方面，寫(xiě)一兩點(diǎn)即可，可以寫(xiě)遵守交通規(guī)則或防溺水等。常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：make friends交朋友，keep calm保持冷靜，had better do sth 最好做某事，go bad 變質(zhì)，do harm to 對(duì)…有害。

高分句型：

①Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health．吃變質(zhì)的食物對(duì)我們的身體有害．句子中Eating food that goes bad 是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，that goes bad作定語(yǔ)修飾food，構(gòu)成定語(yǔ)從句；do harm to對(duì)……有害。

②we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river我們必須記著在河里游泳危險(xiǎn)．句子中 we must remember 后面跟的是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，it's dangerous to do sth做某事是危險(xiǎn)的，it作形式主語(yǔ)，后面的to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)作真正的主語(yǔ)。